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Twisted Dark Elf: Rena's Choice Chapter FourChapter Four: RenaLess and less raindrops fall until no more come. Me and Leah walk back to her house from our stroll, soaking wet. It is fairly late, if she isn’t home soon her sponsors will scold her again.I always wonder what her living space is like. I’ve seen one small room a long time ago but we cheated for even that much. Her sponsors won’t let me inside. I can understand why. Nobody knows anything about where I came from, not even me. Lean is more than kind enough to sneak me food and clothes though, I have nothing to complain about.Of course I stand out in any crowd with my current outfit though. See, the only ones she was able to get to me were the clothes nobody else wanted, thus those they wouldn’t notice were missing. I have a pair of thigh high boots, which are the one normal thing I am wearing. Most humans wear these, especially leather ones. They are very warm and popular. However normally pants are worn with them, human females tend to
Between the Lines (SPN fanfic) chapter tenBetween the LinesChapter TenA “Supernatural” FanfictionSam strolled aimlessly around the city. He looked above and examined the sky as it began to get cloudier. He wondered if that was because something bad was going to happen…probably, thinking about it, probably. As he walked a piece of paper fluttered down from the sky and landed square in his hands. The language written on it was the same as that of the other notes. Sam knew what it was, he knew it was Lucifer’s contract with him.He cussed and tossed the thing in a garbage can. He wouldn’t be able to read it anyway. Sam leaned against the wall. What would happen if he wished Castiel dead? Would he be able to make it work? Would he be able to help his brother get over the loss and then gain his affections? Sam chuckled to himself. It may seem like a silly plan but how was it again that Sam gained his feelings for Dean? It was exactly that, his girlfriend dying and him being left with
Twisted Dark Elf: Rena's Choice Chapter ThreeChapter Three: KarlThe droplets ceased falling from the sky, now I stand here soaked. Allison is across from me, her hand grasped on the handle of the gate entrance to the Dark Elf factuality for support. As much as I would like to think I don’t know why she is seeing me off the answer is all too obvious. However she cannot stop me. I received notice that the Vampires are going after Rena tonight, therefore I must go save the hybrid.“Look” Allison takes a breath as I pause my speech. “Allison. I know it’s dangerous, but I have to go save her.”“But why?” she raises her voice. “It isn’t your job to take care of her!” tears form in her eyes, fury escalating as she speaks.I sigh. “I can’t tell you that. But I have to.” The words have a difficult time coming from my mouth as I try not to upset her more.For a moment a small smile sets on her face, not a happy one but one that she wears to try and