Shattered: Part one (re-write/adaptation) Shattered: Part one Up the Water SpoutThere is a world very different from the one you know. A world that is a prison, you see certain people are locked there and form a population by the slow addition of life as time moves along the ticking clock. This world…is nowhere else but inside a little girls head.She shall receive a visit from us; she lives with her uncle who is not nearly in his right mind. As such the man simply does as he pleases. Did I mention she also lives in a different world? Oh there is no need to be surprised.Something else I should mention: She and I are friends. I am a Wiccan and she is
this fanfic is a sin, and so is Yuki's passwordYuki “Aryanna” the boy mumbled, a slight blush spreading across his pale skin. His ice blue eyes gazed into the blue-grey ones staring back. The girl whose hand he held had short, slightly spiky red hair and also pale skin covered in an array of light freckles. A smile touched his face. “I love you” the whisper was hardly audible, however her small mouth making the shapes to form the sounds was enough to tell. I love you. He loved her too, for so long now, watching her, admiring her through his hiding. When he finally came out of hiding to speak to the beautiful girl she knew who he was, she always knew. “I
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